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Go to sleep now, close your eyes
And try on daring dreams for size
Test your wings now, have no fear
For all is well and I am here

Go to sleep now, close your eyes
And set your gaze on cloudless skies
Explore the world awaiting you
Summon ship, appoint your crew

Go to sleep now, close your eyes
And dream of truth without the lies
See all there is, learn all you can
Remember when your life began

Go to sleep now, close your eyes
Then wake to see the new sunrise
Rest assured in knowing true
That I'll never stop loving you
From the 100 Themes challenge, found @ [link]
Link to folder in my gallery: [link]

Please do not use without my permission.
Comments are welcome and greatly appreciated. Any feedback is great to hear. What can I do better?
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Sword-to-Scabbard Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This poem seems so reassuring that when we sleep and once we wake up, nothing will appear to has changed and we can rest easily. Very nicely written and the words flowed just at the right pace violet :)
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Charwee3 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
This is great I like how it flows, nicely done don't change a thing :)
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violetense Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012  Student Writer
Muchas gracias. :D
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