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You're lost to her: move on.
Please do not use without my permission.
Comments are welcome and greatly appreciated. Any feedback is great to hear. What can I do better?

EDIT: I've been featured here: [link] Thank you so much!! :heart:
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mafxkurofreakjex Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I used this thingie ^^
And I thought maybe you wanted to see it :p so here's the link :p
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TheEmptyChest Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012
Such a hard thing to do (how well I know), but one must do it. Otherwise life can't be lived.
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violetense Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Student Writer
Yes.
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SCFrankles Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Just wanted to say I like the unexpected reversal in the first phrase - "you're lost to her" rather than the "she's lost to you" that the "move on " would suggest. Takes a moment to see it, then you go back to think about the story again.
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violetense Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Student Writer
Gracias :heart:
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