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mildewed [ghosts]
haunt the c.r.a.c.k.s in the w        do not
                             a        mistake
                             l        their voices
                             l        for
                             s        your own.

someday, you may be one of them.
[this is not that day.]

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*raven-dust Feb 18, 2013  Student Writer
Cool format, gives the poem some unique-ness :D
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:iconjunete:
This is great. I love the formatting and I love this: "do not mistake their voices for your own."
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~InkySnowflakes Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love the layout of this! It's definitely different, but not necessarily in a bad way.

This is a great poem, too. I like how it's so concise.
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`dreamsinstatic Feb 1, 2013  Professional Writer
Your fantastic work has been featured in Friday Night Features.
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~violetense Feb 3, 2013  Student Writer
Muchas gracias!! :heart:
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`dreamsinstatic Feb 6, 2013  Professional Writer
You're welcome.
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=Daghrgenzeen Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I am in love with your way of writing.
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This was really good, kind of creepy in the best way possible. Really different and interesting.
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~m-AliceM Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I would like to see this on walls.
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Mood: Wow! ~LilMijou Jan 31, 2013  Student General Artist
Very interesting visual
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