literature

Writer's block

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Literature Text

Oh words, my words, where have you gone?
I've searched both high and low:
My words are nowhere to be found
But why, I do not know.
So many things I want to say,
All bottled up inside;
But there is no relief today--
Oh words, why must you hide???
Please do not use without my permission.
Comments are welcome and greatly appreciated. Any feedback is great to hear. What can I do better?
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Aurourastar's avatar
This poem is very good, the word choises are great! I can't find any problems in this poem except you might not want the three question marks at the end of your poem. However, that might just be me, considering that I'm not familiar with poetry...

But overall, this poem is awesome!