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Oh words, my words, where have you gone?
I've searched both high and low:
My words are nowhere to be found
But why, I do not know.
So many things I want to say,
All bottled up inside;
But there is no relief today--
Oh words, why must you hide???
Please do not use without my permission.
Comments are welcome and greatly appreciated. Any feedback is great to hear. What can I do better?
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Aurourastar Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Student Digital Artist
This poem is very good, the word choises are great! I can't find any problems in this poem except you might not want the three question marks at the end of your poem. However, that might just be me, considering that I'm not familiar with poetry...

But overall, this poem is awesome!
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violetense Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Student Writer
Gracias :)
It was just something scribbled in class, it's not meant to be formal or anything
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ARH1997 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Isn't it ironic writing about writer's block?
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violetense Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012  Student Writer
Quite.
This is what happens when I'm supposed to be writing an assignment for school and nothing is coming...just go with the flow and take whatever I can get.
One of the few times this strategy produced anything at all.
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Charwee3 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Good poem it flows well, I feel the same sometimes my poetry won't get off the ground.
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violetense Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012  Student Writer
LOL I feel that way all the freaking time...OLIA
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Charwee3 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
It's so annoying isn't it? oh well
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Sikizu Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Same thing with drawing, except that instead of the drawing hiding, it comes out as CRAP. And then you try to re-draw it... and re-draw it... and re-draw it until you're so sick of drawing, you go don't draw for a week after. XC Hope your words come out of hiding, though.
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violetense Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012  Student Writer
Meh. They're pissed at me right now and won't come out of hiding.
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Sikizu Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Or that. XD
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